演员孙红雷有一句“雷人”的广告词:“我们都是有故事的人。”但你讲的故事要中听、耐听,还要看你的故事中能“爆”出多少“料”来。如果你“爆”出的“料”拾人牙慧,听者必定寥寥;你要想听者云集,就必须“爆”出生猛的“料”来。为此,我们在记叙文中讲故事,一定要嚼别人没有嚼过的甘蔗。日前,笔者布置学生写一篇题为“历练”的作文,批阅后大跌眼镜,全班54人,讲的故事如下: Actor Honglei have a “Leiman” ad: “We are all storytellers.” But you tell the story to listen, Naiting, but also depends on your story can “burst ”How much out of“ material ”to. If you “burst ” out “material ” pick up people, the listener must be a handful; you want to hear the audience gathered, you must “burst ” was born fierce “material ”. For this reason, we tell stories in narratives and we must chew sugarcane that people do not chew. A few days ago, I arranged for the students to write an essay entitled “Experience ” essay, stunned after reading, the class 54 people, tell the story as follows: