【小序】读田禾诗集《乡野》(江苏文艺出版社2013年12月版),颇生感触。想写一篇评论,无奈左右难逢其源,自惭晦涩。不如选取部分诗作,随兴点评,或可见一时之性灵,发诗人之意趣。文字不求缜密,结构任其散漫,行于当行,止于当止,权作茶余饭后谈资,切勿求全责备可矣。流水江南是水做的,水做的江南,到处是流水一万年前的水,一万年后的水都朝着一个方向流淌水从深山流来,从峡谷流来从云端和高山流水的源头流来那年,我与黑八爷上山采药,无意中 【Small order】 read Tian He poetry “Countryside” (Jiangsu Literature and Art Publishing House 2013 December Edition), quite students feel. Want to write a comment, helpless about its source, self-esteem obscure. It is better to select some of the poems, with Xing comments, or can be seen temporary spiritual, poet’s interest. The text does not seek meticulous, the structure of any of its casual, as the line, stop when the right to talk about gossip, do not seek full responsibility can be carried on. Jiangnan water is made of water south of the river is full of flowing water ten thousand years ago, ten thousand years after the water is flowing in one direction from the deep stream flows from the valley flows from the clouds and the source of mountain water Flow that year, I and Black Herbal Hill herbs, inadvertently