《旅行》这组诗写得很不错,尤其是几首诗一起读,整体感觉非常好,作者的青春少年的心绪写得很细腻。《旅行包》这一首,作者面对旅行包那种无可奈何的样子,好像就在面前。少年渴望远行,渴望改变刻板的生活,这首诗给了我们某种少年的回想。《雨》这首诗里,有一个朦胧的身影,站在屋子里,看着窗外的雨,显得孤独,也有些落寞。少年的心如雨,少年的心如梦。这首诗是对少年情感复杂性的表达。 “Travel” This group of poems write very well, especially a few poems read together, the overall feeling is very good, the author's young boy's mood written very delicate. “Travel bag” This song, the author of the travel bag that kind of helpless look, it seems to be in front. Teenager longing for a long journey, eager to change the rigid life, this poem gives us some kind of juvenile memories. In the poem “Rain,” there is a shadowy figure standing in the room, looking out the window of the rain, it seems lonely, but also some lonely. Teenager's heart rains, juvenile heart dreaming. This poem is an expression of the complexities of teenagers' emotions.