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高考作文好比世界杯足球赛决赛。你在后场控球,长途奔袭,前有堵截,后有追兵,过五关,斩六将,左躲右闪,东突西拐,历经千辛万苦,终于来到了球门,你临门一脚,结果——1.进了,角度刁钻(立意、构思、材料新),最佳进球!!2.偏了(审题错误),前功尽弃!3.进了,但太低(立意太低),难得高分。4.进了,但太高(立意太高),差点飞出横梁,风险太大。5.进了,但太正(立意太正),难算最佳进球。
College entrance essay like FIFA World Cup finals. You control the ball in the backcourt, long-range raid, before the interception, there are chase after the soldiers, over five clearance, cut six will, left hide right flash, East Turkistan pass, after untold hardships, finally came the goal, you come Feet, the results - 1. Into the angle of tricky (conception, ideas, new materials), the best goal !! 2. Off the side (trial error), come to naught! 3 into, but too low ), A rare high score. Into, but too high (intention is too high), almost out of the beam, the risk is too great. 5. Into, but too positive (too intended), difficult to count the best goal.