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悠长的暑假刚刚过去,你到哪去旅行了呢?玩了些什么呢?是不是有很多话可以跟大伙说说?更开心的是,国庆节又在向我们招手啦!你又有哪些出行计划呢?哈哈!Come on,与让大伙一起分享你的快乐吧——
热身练习 请根据所给图片及提示语, 仿照所给例子编写小对话。
(bird nest, three days, great, the opening ceremony of 2008 Olympic Games(北京奥运会开幕式).
Example:
A: What are you doing for vacation?
B: I'm going to the bird nest.
A: How long are you staying?
B: Just for three days.
A: That sounds great. What are you doing there?
B: I'm going to watch the opening ceremony of 2008 Olympic Games (北京奥运会开幕式).
A: Well, have a good time!
写作练习:
"十一"黄金周就要到了,大家会有一段休闲放松的好时光。如果你和你的家人或朋友去旅游,请你根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文。提示要点如下:
Where are you going?
Who are you going with?
Why are you going there?
What are you doing there?
How long are you staying there?
写作方法指导:
1. 书面表达的体裁是一篇记叙文,应该注
意时态的选择。
2. 写文章是一定要根据要点来书写。
(1)旅游的地点要在头脑中构思好。(2)和谁一起去。(3)旅游的理由。(4)旅游时所做的事情。(5)旅游的时间。
3. 阐明对旅游的希望。
作品呈现:
National Day is coming. We can have a seven-day holiday. I am going to Beijing for a vacation with my family. We all know it's the capital of China and there are many places of interest in Beijing. We are staying there for a week. We are going hiking to the Great Wall. We are visiting the Tiananmen Square. We are visiting the bird nest--the great building. We are also going boating in the Summer Place. I think we'll have a good time there.
精彩点评:
纵观全文,我们可以发现作者写作时很谨慎。文章紧扣题目要求,涵盖了所有的要点,条理清晰。在表述每一个要点时,语言凝练,言简意赅。在句式表达方面,作者紧扣本节课的重点句型be going的用法,多用简单句,避免了语法错误的出现。但同句型反复使用,句式显得有些单调。
中考链接: (2006 山东)
丰富多彩的暑假生活即将开始了,快约上几个好朋友一起
去旅行吧。假如你是马琳,请你通过e-mail的方式向你的朋友
张鹏发出邀请,组织好这次旅游。
提示:
(1)对他发出邀请;
(2)你的计划简介,包括活动内容、目的、时间、地点等等;
(3)提醒他需要准备的东西;
(4)约定出发时间和见面地点;
(5)词数:80-100;
(6)开头和结尾已经给出,不包括在所要求的词数内。
One possible version:
Hi, Zhang Peng! I hope all is going well.
What's your plan for the coming summer holiday? Some of my classmates would like to go cycling. Will you come with us? We are planning to ride to the mountains around our town. We hope to get away from our school life and get near to the nature and smell the fresh air. We hope in that way we can relax ourselves thoroughly(完全地).
We'll start at 8:00 next Sunday morning. If you can come, please let me know and we'll wait for you at 7:50 in front of our school.
What's more, get everything ready for the outing, such as your sunglasses, hat, food and drinks. We hope to have a picnic in the mountains.
Be sure to come and I'm sure we'll have a wonderful time.
Hope to see you soon!
Sincerely yours,
Ma Lin
学生练兵台:
同学们,也许你正在为即将到来的国庆节策划出行,来看看其他同学在节日里是怎么度过的吧——
学生作品:
My Plan On National Day
I am very happy that I have been to Shanghai during this holiday. On October 1st, I went to Shanghai with my friends. On the way to shanghai, I was very excited and told many things about shanghai to them. It is my first time to go a trip with my friends instead of my parents. We arrived at 1 p.m.. We were so excited that we went to play without a bit of rest. First we went to the oriental pearl TV tower. Then we went shopping in the Nanjing Road. I bought a suit of red clothes. And Lifang, a friend of mine, bought a green one. During the nest three days, we have been to the Chenghuang Temple, the shanghai zoo and so on. Now we are still very excited about this trip. I wish we can go to shanghai together again.
热身练习 请根据所给图片及提示语, 仿照所给例子编写小对话。
(bird nest, three days, great, the opening ceremony of 2008 Olympic Games(北京奥运会开幕式).
Example:
A: What are you doing for vacation?
B: I'm going to the bird nest.
A: How long are you staying?
B: Just for three days.
A: That sounds great. What are you doing there?
B: I'm going to watch the opening ceremony of 2008 Olympic Games (北京奥运会开幕式).
A: Well, have a good time!
写作练习:
"十一"黄金周就要到了,大家会有一段休闲放松的好时光。如果你和你的家人或朋友去旅游,请你根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文。提示要点如下:
Where are you going?
Who are you going with?
Why are you going there?
What are you doing there?
How long are you staying there?
写作方法指导:
1. 书面表达的体裁是一篇记叙文,应该注
意时态的选择。
2. 写文章是一定要根据要点来书写。
(1)旅游的地点要在头脑中构思好。(2)和谁一起去。(3)旅游的理由。(4)旅游时所做的事情。(5)旅游的时间。
3. 阐明对旅游的希望。
作品呈现:
National Day is coming. We can have a seven-day holiday. I am going to Beijing for a vacation with my family. We all know it's the capital of China and there are many places of interest in Beijing. We are staying there for a week. We are going hiking to the Great Wall. We are visiting the Tiananmen Square. We are visiting the bird nest--the great building. We are also going boating in the Summer Place. I think we'll have a good time there.
精彩点评:
纵观全文,我们可以发现作者写作时很谨慎。文章紧扣题目要求,涵盖了所有的要点,条理清晰。在表述每一个要点时,语言凝练,言简意赅。在句式表达方面,作者紧扣本节课的重点句型be going的用法,多用简单句,避免了语法错误的出现。但同句型反复使用,句式显得有些单调。
中考链接: (2006 山东)
丰富多彩的暑假生活即将开始了,快约上几个好朋友一起
去旅行吧。假如你是马琳,请你通过e-mail的方式向你的朋友
张鹏发出邀请,组织好这次旅游。
提示:
(1)对他发出邀请;
(2)你的计划简介,包括活动内容、目的、时间、地点等等;
(3)提醒他需要准备的东西;
(4)约定出发时间和见面地点;
(5)词数:80-100;
(6)开头和结尾已经给出,不包括在所要求的词数内。
One possible version:
Hi, Zhang Peng! I hope all is going well.
What's your plan for the coming summer holiday? Some of my classmates would like to go cycling. Will you come with us? We are planning to ride to the mountains around our town. We hope to get away from our school life and get near to the nature and smell the fresh air. We hope in that way we can relax ourselves thoroughly(完全地).
We'll start at 8:00 next Sunday morning. If you can come, please let me know and we'll wait for you at 7:50 in front of our school.
What's more, get everything ready for the outing, such as your sunglasses, hat, food and drinks. We hope to have a picnic in the mountains.
Be sure to come and I'm sure we'll have a wonderful time.
Hope to see you soon!
Sincerely yours,
Ma Lin
学生练兵台:
同学们,也许你正在为即将到来的国庆节策划出行,来看看其他同学在节日里是怎么度过的吧——
学生作品:
My Plan On National Day
I am very happy that I have been to Shanghai during this holiday. On October 1st, I went to Shanghai with my friends. On the way to shanghai, I was very excited and told many things about shanghai to them. It is my first time to go a trip with my friends instead of my parents. We arrived at 1 p.m.. We were so excited that we went to play without a bit of rest. First we went to the oriental pearl TV tower. Then we went shopping in the Nanjing Road. I bought a suit of red clothes. And Lifang, a friend of mine, bought a green one. During the nest three days, we have been to the Chenghuang Temple, the shanghai zoo and so on. Now we are still very excited about this trip. I wish we can go to shanghai together again.