贵刊一九九四年第九期的彩页上登载了一组山水盆景的照片,我觉得其中《冬日待渡》有三点不妥之处,写出来谨供作者、读者参考。一、盆中石块搭配不顺,给人以零乱的感觉,犹如垒石。山石后面种的植物不成树样,与人与船都不成比例。不论画山或者在盆中布山都贵在有脉络,此盆景各石块之间间隙过大,又不相倚,没有以脉络系之,总的印象 In the color page of your issue of the Ninth Issue of 1994, a group of photos of landscape bonsai are posted. I think there are three wrong points in the “winter solstice for crossing the border”. I wrote it for reference only to authors and readers. First, the basin with stones is not smooth, gives the feeling of messy, like a base stone. The plants planted behind the rock are not tree-like, and are disproportionate to both man and boat. Regardless of painting mountains or cloth in the basin are expensive in the context, the bonsai stones between the gap is too large, they do not trust each other, there is no veins, the general impression