现在学生习作 ,一个通病就是“编造”。原因大多是眼中无物 ,腹内空空 ,思想迟钝 ,感情贫弱。要克服这样的毛病 ,一个有效的方法是引导习作者写“真实”。即摹写亲身阅历 ,表述切身感受。这就要求习作者学会细细观察 ,多多体味 ,勤于联想 ,善于表达。今介绍一篇习作 ,可谓描写自身 ,情笃意深的写实之作。略加评点 ,希望对习作者能有所启示。 Now students practice, a common problem is “making”. Most of the reasons are nothing in the eyes, empty stomach, slow thinking, feelings of weakness. To overcome such problems, an effective way is to guide the writers to write “real.” Namely copy personal experience, expression personal feelings. This requires that learners learn to observe carefully, much taste, diligent in association, good at expression. This article introduces an exercise, can be described as their own, love Benedict deep realistic. A little comment, I hope the author can have some inspiration.