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张蓝天同学长达2000多字的童话故事,运用大胆的想象,细腻的描写,把现实与幻想有机地结合起来,表现出小作者丰富的想象力和美好的愿望,也折射出现实生活点点弊端,体现出小作者敏锐的观察力和对社会关注热情。在写作构思上,主要表现以下几个特点:一、想象出一个和谐温馨家庭的环境。文章前半部分,作者用大段笔墨为长胡子精灵想象一个家的环境。这是一个精灵的家族,里面住着精灵的家人,人人都有理想的工作。只是长胡子精灵赋闲在家,而且还需要家人的照顾。也正是因为这一点,使得长胡子精灵有了外出工作的愿望。为下面很自然地由家庭写到社会,做好了铺垫。
Zhang Lantian's classmates up to more than 2000 words of fairy tale, the use of bold imagination, delicate description, the reality and fantasy organically combine to show the rich author's imagination and good wishes, but also reflects the real life of a little bit of shortcomings , Reflecting the keen observation of the small author and the enthusiasm of the community. In the writing concept, the main features of the following features: First, imagine a harmonious and warm family environment. The first half of the article, the author uses a large number of ink for the bearded elves imagine a home environment. This is a genie family, which houses the Elves family, everyone has the ideal job. Only long bearded elves idle at home, but also the need for family care. It is precisely because of this, making long beard elves have the desire to go out to work. For the following naturally by the family wrote to the community, well paved the way.