失误原因:内容空洞题目:留香一考生商场里各种香味交织,那样浓郁。名贵的香水味稍纵即逝,那样的不真实,远不如花香。雨后的小路有些泥泞,你在前面跑着,沾染了泥点却毫不自知。你说,雨后的空气好清新呢。我只觉得,泥土的苦涩又更深了。分别的时候终于要到了吗?我扯住你的衣袖,你一顿,手中的花也颤了颤,落下一片花瓣。你有些恼怒,幸而我很快松开。①既然写到花,为何不描写“花香”与后文呼应呢? Reason for the error: the content of the empty topic: a fragrance shop in a variety of fragrance interwoven, as rich. Expensive perfume smell fleeting, so unreal, far less floral. The path after the rain was muddy, and you ran in front of you, but you did not know it when it was contaminated with mud. You say that the air after the rain is so fresh. I only think that the soil is bitter and deeper. When are you finally coming? I grab your sleeves, you meal, the hands of the flowers also trembled, falling a petal. You are a little annoyed, fortunately I soon release. ① Since you write flowers, why not describe “floral” echoed with the text afterwards?