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台湾资深作家李敖曾提出一个观点:“我们看文章,要问的只是:一,要表达什么;二,表达得好不好?”这可以作为衡量写作优劣的“标准”。“有创意地表达”是语文课程标准中反复强调的理念。表达什么与如何表达,是写好作文的基本要求与“秘诀”。以一位初二女生的作文《雨》为例,这篇《雨》在表达什么与如何表达方面存在着如下主要问题。该文所存在的问题,将会对其他同学有所启示。请先看:
Li Aoo, a veteran Taiwanese writer, once put forward a view: “We read the article and asked only: First, what should be expressed; Second, the expression is not good?” This can be used as a “standard” for measuring the pros and cons of writing. “Creatively expressing ” is a concept repeatedly emphasized in Chinese curriculum standards. What to express and how to express it is the basic requirement for writing an essay with “secret ”. Take the example of a girl in grade two, “Rain”, for example. The following major problems exist in the expression of what “rain” means and how it is expressed. The text of the problems that will be enlightenment to other students. Please read: