西晋文学家陆机在《文赋》中有这么一句话:“立片言以居要,乃一篇之警策。”意思就是说:在文章关键、紧要处写上几句精辟的话,就会成为一篇文章的警句。文章的开头也是关键!现在,以我班同学的作文为例,说说记叙文的开头。【失误原文“开头”之一】在绿阴掩映的教室里南京市雨花台中学初一(12)班孙洋 The Western Jin Dynasty writer Lu Ji in the “Wen Fu” there is such a sentence: “The purpose of making a piece of legislation, is a policy of war. ” The meaning is that: in the article the key, the Department wrote a few incisive words, Aphorisms will become an article. The beginning of the article is also the key! Now, take the class composition of my class as an example, talk about the beginning of the narrative. [Error original “beginning ” one] in the shade of the classroom Nanjing Yuhuatai high school first (12) Ban Sun Yang