有位同学拿来了他的作文,指着“朔风像天使一样跑遍大地,传递着严冬来临的信息”一句问道:“老师,这个比喻‘欠妥’在哪里?”一般说来,比喻先要抓住本体和喻体之间的相似点,这样才能引起人们的自然联想,从而产生形象生动的美感。在文学艺术中,“天使”的形象多为带翅膀的少女或小孩,所以上述比喻把“风”比作“跑遍大地、传递信 One of the classmates took his composition and pointed out that “a hurricane that ran through the earth like an angel delivered the message that the winter was coming.” “Ask a teacher, where is the metaphor ’what is wrong’?” In other words, the metaphor must first grasp the similarity between the ontology and the metaphor so as to arouse people’s natural association and thus produce a vivid and vivid image. In literature and art, the image of ”angel“ is mostly a winged girl or a child. Therefore, the above metaphor compares ”wind“ to ”crossing the earth and transmitting letters."