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之一:忘年之交我是一名铁路职工。十多年前,还是我在广西邕宁县长塘乡德福小学的1994年暑假,我要升五年级了。一天我看到一本叫《百家作文》的杂志,上面刊登了许多小学生的作文。“在名家点评”栏目中,我看到一位叫支玉恒的老师详细地评注了一篇学生的作文。他评得生动有趣,对
One: the turn of years I am a railway worker. More than a decade ago, I was still in fifth grade in the 1994 summer vacation in Telford Elementary School, Changting Township, Suining County, Guangxi. One day I saw a magazine called “100 Compositions,” which featured many pupils’ compositions. In the “Comments on Famous People” column, I saw a teacher named Zhi Yuheng commented in detail on a student’s essay. He commented vividly, right