节选自日本作家木山捷平同名小说的《大仓老师》(五年制小语九册28课)篇幅不长,情节比较简单,就连文中所写的人物语言、动作及活动场面等也都很普通。然而就是这些朴素自然的笔墨,却给我们写出了一位朴实率直、实事求是、刚正不阿的教师形象,并寄托了作者对这位老师的思念之情。细读这篇课文,它在选材、结构、语言上,很有一些值得品味的地方。 Excerpted from the Japanese writer Kusunagi Ping's novel “Omori teacher” (five-year system of small class nine 28) space is not long, the plot is relatively simple, even the text written in the language, action and activities are also very ordinary. However, these simple and natural ink and calligraphy, however, gave us a simple, straightforward, realistic and upright teacher image, and pinned the author's miss for the teacher. Read this text carefully, it is in the selection, structure, language, there are some places worth savoring.