“《包身工》一文写包身工清晨起身之时,作者运用了简洁而细致的写法,对慌乱骚动的情景分别从声音、动作、气味三个方面进行了描写,使人有身临其境之感。”当我说到这儿时,平静的教室里出现了交头接耳、小声嘀咕、脸红低头的现象。有讨论的必要,我赶忙煞住话头,问了一个较为模糊的问题:“大家对这段描写有何评价?”话音刚落,一位性急的女同学站起来气呼呼地答道:“作者这样写破坏了全文的和谐美。” When the work of Bao Baogong was started in the early morning, the author used a concise and meticulous approach to describe the scenes of panic and turmoil from three aspects: sound, movement, and smell. This made people feel immersive. “When I was talking about this, there was a whisper, a whisper, and a blushing in the quiet classroom. There was a need for discussion. I hurried to the top of my head and asked a rather vague question: ”What comment did everyone have on this description?“ When the voice just fell, an impetuous female student stood up and said, snoringly: ”The author wrote this way destroying the harmonious beauty of the full text."