有些同学的文字表达能力不错,语句流畅,可是写出的文章,读起来却总觉得让人感到很平淡。是故事不生动吗?也不是。细细一想,毛病找到了,原来是这些文章(这里说的是记叙文)平面叙述多,场景、对话描绘少,缺少画 Some students have good writing skills and fluency, but when they write articles, they always feel very dull. Is the story not vivid yet? Slight thought, the problems found, the original is the article (here is the narrative) flat narrative, scene, the dialogue depicts less, the lack of painting