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升格后的作文选取升格前作文中的一个事物“哨音”——用独特材料构建意象,在独特的哨音中传递亲情。提升主旨的要诀是,对材料有取舍的识见,不为凑足字数写作。
After the promotion, the essay selected one of the “whistle” in the composition of the pre-upgrade composition – using unique materials to construct images and convey affection in a unique whistle. The key to improving the subject matter is that there is a trade-off for the material, and it is not to write in words.