生活中不乏美,同学们的作文也如此。看别人的文章,看别人文章的长处,看别人文章长处背后所蕴涵的思想情操和写作技巧。学会做人,学会欣赏,学会理解。在点评他人的文章时,与他(她)同行,携起手来,走过一段路,一段青春的路,一段难忘的路,一段今后回想起来或许可以令你回味的路。 There is no lack of beauty in life, so is the composition of the students. Look at other people's articles, look at the strengths of other people's stories, look at the strengths and weaknesses of other people's stories and their writing skills. Learn to be human, learn to appreciate, learn to understand. When commenting on someone else's essay, walk with him or her, go hand in hand, walk a long way, a youthful road, a memorable road, a path you may recall in the future.