爱迪生说过:“最能打动人心灵的还是美。”自然美、艺术美能打动学生的心灵,教师充满感情,文学气息较浓的优美语言恰当地运用在作文评语中更能打动学生的心灵,催化写作热情,深化写作认识,真可谓:语言千古事,得失寸心知。所以,作文评语也应追求人文关怀和艺术性,不妨也可以从以下三点入手: Edison said: "natural beauty, artistic beauty can impress students ’minds, teachers full of emotion, literary atmosphere thicker and more beautiful language properly used in the composition of comments more to impress students’ hearts , Catalyze the enthusiasm for writing and deepen the understanding of writing, indeed: the language of eternal things, gains and losses knowing. Therefore, the composition of reviews should also pursue the humane care and artistic, may wish to start from the following three points: