作文刚起步的孩子最头疼的就是字数。老师规定得写两三百字,怎么办?于是孩子只能一边数一边写。可怜的孩子还可能疲于应付父母的“无理要求”——不能只写一页纸,必须翻篇。文章写不长,是细节不够饱满。孩子写作,爱用概括的语言。如:“爷爷丢了手机,非常着急。”一次,我跟几个孩子聊到这个话题,让他们回想一下,人着急时会有什么反应。孩子们纷纷作答:眉头紧 The most troublesome thing a child has just started is the number of words. The teacher has to write two or three hundred words, how to do? So the child can only write while counting. Poor children may also be struggling with their parents’ “unreasonable demands” - can not just write a page, you must turn over. The article is not long, full details are not enough. Children writing, love in general language. Such as: “Grandpa lost his cell phone, very anxious.” "Once, I talked to a few children on this topic, so that they recall that people will react in a hurry. Children have answered: brow tight