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【考场例文1】在时代的洪流中,珍惜“点滴”之露广东考生黑白胶片时代,纵使照片稀少,日渐泛黄,“点滴”的回忆却总被唤起,永不褪色。数码时代,照片多,永不褪色。但是记忆却在褪色,值得珍惜的“点滴”之露却在蒸发。我愿得陶潜之手,在时代的洪流中,拾捧并珍惜那点滴之露。[点评:开篇引用材料,分两段表述,突出了黑白
In the torrent of the era, cherish “drip ” exposure of the candidates in Guangdong black and white film era, even though the photos are scarce, increasingly yellowing, “bit by bit ” memories are always evoked, never fade. Digital age, many photos, never fade. But the memory is fading, it is worth cherishing “drip ” dew is evaporating. I would like to Tao potential hand in the torrent of the times, picked up and cherish the bit by bit dew. [Comment: The opening quoted material, divided into two paragraphs, highlighting the black and white