潘向黎的这篇小说,就技巧和单纯的文字质量而言,比不上她获鲁迅文学奖的短篇《白水青菜》,而且它本是作为作品中人物的创作嵌入潘向黎的中篇《弥城》中的,但我独独对它产生了很深的印象,认为应该把它拈出来,作一个单独的篇什来欣赏评价。 Pan Xiangli’s novel, in terms of skill and purely text quality, can not compare with the short story “Baishui Green Vegetable” which she won the prize of Lu Xun’s literature, and it is supposed to be embedded in Pan Xiangli’s medium-length “Mi City” as the creation of characters in her works. But I was impressed with it alone, thinking that it should be taken out as a separate article to enjoy the evaluation.