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【主持人语】在这一期的来稿中,我们看到了薛华老师的《“财富”话题作文升格训练》一文,文中薛老师对一篇以财富为话题的考场作文进行了把脉,指出了文章的不足之处并指导学生对文章进行了修改。可以说,这一修改过程充分体现了薛华老师自己对好的考场作文的理解和要求。于是,我们想到邀请更多的老师参与到我们的栏目当中,各自说一说自己对好作文的理解。为了便于操作,要求老师们同样对薛华老师提供的“璞玉待琢”那篇文章进行了升格,由于版面所限,现只选录了赵素青、张松涛两位老师的文章。大家一起来看看他们对于好的考场作文的理解和要求,同时也欢迎各位老师将您自己更好的见解和升格方法告诉我们。
Moderator language】 【In this contribution, we see Xue Hua teacher “” wealth “topic composition promotion training,” a text of Xue teacher on a wealth of the examination room essay conducted the pulse, Point out the shortcomings of the article and guide students to modify the article. It can be said that this modification process fully reflects the understanding and requirements of Xue Hua's own excellent examination room composition. So, we think of inviting more teachers to our column, each talking about their understanding of good essay. In order to facilitate the operation, the teachers were asked to upgrade the article entitled “Uncut Jade” provided by Xue Hua. Due to the limitation of the layout, only the articles of Zhao Suqing and Zhang Songtao were selected. Let's take a look at their comprehension and requirements for good essay composition, and also welcome teachers to tell us your own better insights and escalation methods.