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俗话说“孩子总是自家的好”,写作文,很多人也有这种想法。他们总认为自己写得不错,于是,缺点或弊病便在不知不觉中被疏忽了。要是能做到“得失自知”,相信会不断登上新的台阶。这里,我们从上海市第十一届中学生作文比赛的参赛卷中选出三篇,指出它们存在的问题,目的在于告诉大家:像这类作文,只要稍作修改,或构思时略加注意,质量就可提高一步,甚至达到较高的水平。
As the saying goes, “Children are always good at home.” Writing a essay, many people also have this idea. They always think that they are doing well. Therefore, the defects or ills are neglected. If we can achieve “needs and gains”, we believe we will continue to climb to a new level. Here, we have selected three articles from the 11th competition contest of the Shanghai Middle School Students Composition Competition and pointed out their existing problems. The purpose is to tell everyone: For such essays, if they are modified slightly, or if they are thought of with care, Quality can be increased one step, even to a higher level.