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Steamed rice is the commonest food for Chinese and served almost everyday. It is prepared with various ingredients to enrich its tastes. Fried rice is my favorite. Now let me tell you how to make it！
First， you should steam some rice. This step is important， for it determines if the rice is delicious. Next， cut some vegetables like carrots and onions into pieces. You can cut up some sausages， too. Third， heat two spoonfuls of oil in a pan. Then， add the chopped vegetables with a teaspoon of salt and pepper. If you want your fried rice more appetizing， you can also put in some beans， corn and a scrambled egg， and start to fry. After doing that， add the steamed rice and mix everything together. When you finish these steps， turn off the gas， and you can enjoy your fried rice！
Do you love cooking？ Are you interested in making fried rice？ This is my method to make fried rice， what’s your own way of making rice dishes？
【简评】本文是一篇说明文，小作者用精炼的语言描述了做炒饭的过程。作者用了first， next， after doing that等词汇使得说明过程清晰，逻辑合理。此外，长短句的结合使用使得文章可读性较强。英语的说明文写作重在结构合理和语言准确。本文的小作者做到了这两点。作为一名七年级的学生，能写出这样一篇优秀的作文实属难得。如果能够再多一些句式的变换文章会更加精彩。
指导教师：安虹
First， you should steam some rice. This step is important， for it determines if the rice is delicious. Next， cut some vegetables like carrots and onions into pieces. You can cut up some sausages， too. Third， heat two spoonfuls of oil in a pan. Then， add the chopped vegetables with a teaspoon of salt and pepper. If you want your fried rice more appetizing， you can also put in some beans， corn and a scrambled egg， and start to fry. After doing that， add the steamed rice and mix everything together. When you finish these steps， turn off the gas， and you can enjoy your fried rice！
Do you love cooking？ Are you interested in making fried rice？ This is my method to make fried rice， what’s your own way of making rice dishes？
【简评】本文是一篇说明文，小作者用精炼的语言描述了做炒饭的过程。作者用了first， next， after doing that等词汇使得说明过程清晰，逻辑合理。此外，长短句的结合使用使得文章可读性较强。英语的说明文写作重在结构合理和语言准确。本文的小作者做到了这两点。作为一名七年级的学生，能写出这样一篇优秀的作文实属难得。如果能够再多一些句式的变换文章会更加精彩。
指导教师：安虹