精准立意,个性表达——第四届“求学杯”高考作文模拟大赛例文评析

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总的来看,这四篇成绩较好的赛场作文有一些共同的特点。其一,能够从材料出发引出观点,且切中题旨。其二,在立意、文采、阅读积累、思想深刻性等方面都有不俗的表现。其三,现场感强,没有任何套作嫌疑,让人印象深刻。如果用一句话来形容它们突出的特点,大概可以用“精准立意,个性表达”来概括——这其实也应该成为每位考生在正式的高考考场上的必备素养。当然,也有存在不足之处,而且这些不足之处还有很大的普遍性。其一是审题立意仍有待加强。这四篇佳作从立意上看都是属 In general, there are some common features among the four better track compositions. First, we can start from the material point of view, and cut the title. Second, in the conception, literary talent, reading accumulation, profound thinking and other aspects have a decent performance. Third, strong sense of the scene, without any set of suspects, impressive. If you use one sentence to describe their salient features, you can probably use “precise conception, individual expression” to summarize - in fact, it should become a candidate for each candidate in the formal college entrance examination of the necessary qualities. Of course, there are also deficiencies, but these deficiencies are still very general. One is that the concept of examining questions remains to be strengthened. These four masterpieces are congenial terms
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