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每年高考、中考过后,都出现了很多满分或优秀作文,仔细把玩、赏析这些满分或优秀作文,会有一个意想不到的发现:众多满分作文或优秀作文,都不约而同地喜欢使用一种极具表现力的修辞手法——排比。排比,何以能够打造出这么多的满分作文或优秀作文?细究起来,原因有四。一是排比很能造成一种铺排、酣畅之气势,这种气势有如滚滚长江,一泻千里如满分文《舞动飞翔的翅膀》,一头一尾的句子都是非常整齐的排比句,开头是“如果,寂寞是一朵即将枯萎的花,知识就是滋润万物的甘露。如果,苦难是一片浩淼无涯的海,智慧就是乘风破浪的巨轮。如果,
Every year college entrance examination, after the exam, there are many full or excellent essay, carefully play, appreciate these perfect or excellent essay, there will be an unexpected discovery: many full essay or excellent essay, both invariably like to use a very performance Power of rhetorical devices - Pai than. Pai than, why can create so many full-time essay or excellent composition? Fine study, there are four reasons. First, the ratio is very able to create a kind of arrangement, hearty imposing manner, this momentum is like billowing the Yangtze River, blew out of thousands of miles full of text ”dancing flying wings", one after the other sentence is a very neat row of sentences, beginning with , Loneliness is a forthcoming withered flower, knowledge is the nectar of nourishing all things .If, suffering is a sea of vastness and boundlessness, wisdom is the wind and waves of the wheel .If,