青果微点评:本文的奇特之处在于用一个梦的形式展现了我对于春天的强烈渴望,很有新意。其次,对于梦境的描写十分吸引人,让我们仿佛进入了一个童话世界。“啊,真美啊!”我用惊奇的眼神望着昨天还只是黄秃秃一片的田野说道。田野上如今已开满了梨花,它们用粉嫩的小脸蛋来迎接春天。小草们纷纷从泥土中钻了出来,好奇地张望着。青菜也变得绿油油的,还添了一顶金黄色的小帽子。正当我看得入迷时,一只粉蝴蝶把我的目 Green micro comments: This article is unique in that it shows me a strong desire for the spring in a form of dream, very innovative. Secondly, the description of the dream is very attractive, let us seem to have entered a fairy tale world. “Ah, so beautiful ah!” I looked with astonished eyes Yesterday, only yellow bare bald fields said. Fields are now full of pear flowers, they use pink little face to greet the spring. The grass has drilled out from the soil, curiously looked at. Green vegetables have also become green, but also added a little golden hat. As I was fascinated, a pink butterfly put my eyes