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寒假生活是丰富多彩的，把你度过的快乐时光记录下来，就是一次很好的练笔机会，我们应该充分把握时机，多写多练，这对于提高同学们的英语写作能力和交际能力大有好处。写寒假生活的文章多为记叙文，如日记、新闻报道、回忆录、人物介绍、故事等。下面就常见的记叙文作一重点讲解。
（一）叙述方式
1.顺序：以情节发生的时间先后顺序记述事件。
2.倒叙：从故事或事件结尾开始叙述。
3.插叙：从故事或事件中间写起。
（二）注意事项
1.中心明确。选择寒假生活中典型的情节或事例加以描述，避免写与主题无关的词句。
2.线索清楚。记叙寒假生活，做到事件发展的脉络清晰，可按时间顺序或事物发展的先后次序来写。
3.讲清五个W（即when， where，who，what，why）。只要用词恰当，符合英语语言习惯，书写格式规范，一般都能达到题目的要求。
都能达到题目的要求。
4.合理使用频率副词always，usually，often，sometimes，hardly ever， never。这些词一般放在助动词之后，行为动词之前，它们所修饰的动词的程度依次减弱，排序为：always（总是、一直）＞usually（通常）＞often（经常、常常）＞sometimes（有时）＞hardly ever（几乎从不、很少）＞ never（从来不、决不）。
【学生习作】
题目：以“My winter holiday”为题，写一篇小短文，字数在100词左右。
内容要求：
①去年寒假你印象较深的经历。
②今年寒假你有什么计划和安排。
③你理想中的寒假生活是什么样子的？
My winter holiday
Ilookforwardtothe winter holiday every year. Last winter I go ① to Sanya for my holiday, which is also a seaside city like Qingdao. I enjoyed to have ② a walk along the beach after supper. Itreally is ③ “cool”.
I plan to spend my winter holiday on sports this year. Playing football is always my favorite , so some of my classmates and I would ④ form a team and play football together. Sometimes we may have a match against some other teams. We’re sure that we will be happy because we hardly ever lost ⑤ the games these years.
If you ask me what my favorite winter holiday will be like, traveling around the world is the only answer. I like traveling so much that I often meet different people and visit different places of interest in my dream. I wish I could have two winter holidays in a year.
【老师评述】 该文层次分明，叙事清楚，基本符合寒假生活记叙文的写作要求，语言较生动、流畅，但也存在一些词汇和语法方面的错误。
① Last winter“去年冬天”是过去时的标志词，故谓语动词应该用过去式，go要改为went。
② “enjoy doing sth.”“喜欢干某事”，是一个固定用法，enjoy后不可接不定式，只能接动名词。故to have应该改为having。
③ really修饰动词或形容词时，一般放在这些词的前面，或系动词之后。故really放在is之后。
④ 现在计划去干的事情，应该用将来时，故would应改为will。
⑤ hardly ever一般用于一般现在时中，故lost应改为lose。
【小试身手】记述今年寒假的一次郊游活动，应包括以下内容。① 时间：今年寒假 ② 地点：海边 ③活动内容：搭帐篷，在露天生火做饭,讲故事,唱歌,做游戏等。④感受：尽管很累，大家玩得很痛快。
生词提示：去郊游：go for/on an outing。
要求：用第一人称写，字数在70词左右。
参考范文:
In this winter vacation, some of my classmates and I went for an outing to the seaside. It took us several hours to reach there. As soon as we got there， we started to put up our tent. Then we made a fire in the open air and cooked a meal. After a wonderful meal we told stories， sang songs and played games. Though we were tired, all of us had a goodtimethatday.Iamlooking forward to going outing again.
（一）叙述方式
1.顺序：以情节发生的时间先后顺序记述事件。
2.倒叙：从故事或事件结尾开始叙述。
3.插叙：从故事或事件中间写起。
（二）注意事项
1.中心明确。选择寒假生活中典型的情节或事例加以描述，避免写与主题无关的词句。
2.线索清楚。记叙寒假生活，做到事件发展的脉络清晰，可按时间顺序或事物发展的先后次序来写。
3.讲清五个W（即when， where，who，what，why）。只要用词恰当，符合英语语言习惯，书写格式规范，一般都能达到题目的要求。
都能达到题目的要求。
4.合理使用频率副词always，usually，often，sometimes，hardly ever， never。这些词一般放在助动词之后，行为动词之前，它们所修饰的动词的程度依次减弱，排序为：always（总是、一直）＞usually（通常）＞often（经常、常常）＞sometimes（有时）＞hardly ever（几乎从不、很少）＞ never（从来不、决不）。
【学生习作】
题目：以“My winter holiday”为题，写一篇小短文，字数在100词左右。
内容要求：
①去年寒假你印象较深的经历。
②今年寒假你有什么计划和安排。
③你理想中的寒假生活是什么样子的？
My winter holiday
Ilookforwardtothe winter holiday every year. Last winter I go ① to Sanya for my holiday, which is also a seaside city like Qingdao. I enjoyed to have ② a walk along the beach after supper. Itreally is ③ “cool”.
I plan to spend my winter holiday on sports this year. Playing football is always my favorite , so some of my classmates and I would ④ form a team and play football together. Sometimes we may have a match against some other teams. We’re sure that we will be happy because we hardly ever lost ⑤ the games these years.
If you ask me what my favorite winter holiday will be like, traveling around the world is the only answer. I like traveling so much that I often meet different people and visit different places of interest in my dream. I wish I could have two winter holidays in a year.
【老师评述】 该文层次分明，叙事清楚，基本符合寒假生活记叙文的写作要求，语言较生动、流畅，但也存在一些词汇和语法方面的错误。
① Last winter“去年冬天”是过去时的标志词，故谓语动词应该用过去式，go要改为went。
② “enjoy doing sth.”“喜欢干某事”，是一个固定用法，enjoy后不可接不定式，只能接动名词。故to have应该改为having。
③ really修饰动词或形容词时，一般放在这些词的前面，或系动词之后。故really放在is之后。
④ 现在计划去干的事情，应该用将来时，故would应改为will。
⑤ hardly ever一般用于一般现在时中，故lost应改为lose。
【小试身手】记述今年寒假的一次郊游活动，应包括以下内容。① 时间：今年寒假 ② 地点：海边 ③活动内容：搭帐篷，在露天生火做饭,讲故事,唱歌,做游戏等。④感受：尽管很累，大家玩得很痛快。
生词提示：去郊游：go for/on an outing。
要求：用第一人称写，字数在70词左右。
参考范文:
In this winter vacation, some of my classmates and I went for an outing to the seaside. It took us several hours to reach there. As soon as we got there， we started to put up our tent. Then we made a fire in the open air and cooked a meal. After a wonderful meal we told stories， sang songs and played games. Though we were tired, all of us had a goodtimethatday.Iamlooking forward to going outing again.