点评:作者用轻松活泼的语调,生动具体地描绘出了初三的生活,平日里的酸甜苦辣以及喜怒哀乐。别具一格的视觉,让整篇文章极为诙谐有趣,读起来让人不禁会心一笑。(指导老师:李美玲)光阴荏苒,转眼间就步入初中最后一个阶梯。回望走过的路,却寻不回我们路上的足迹。于是,我们把回忆拍成一部电影或是制成一本影集,记录我们初中生活的喜怒哀愁。把我的信任放在你的掌心朋友借钱。他说他一定会还的。于是,我把信任放于他掌心。若他未 Comments: The author with a relaxed and lively tone, vividly depicts the life of the first three days, the usual ups and downs and emotions. Unique visual, so that the entire article is very witty fun, read people can not help but smile. (Mentor: Li Meiling) Time 荏 苒, blink of an eye into the middle of the last ladder. Looking back on the road, but can not find our footprints on the road. So, we make memories of a movie or make an album, record our mood of joys and sorrows junior high school life. Put my trust in your palm Friends borrow money. He said he will return. So, I put trust in his palm. If he does not