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文题以“挤”为话题写一篇亲情类记叙文。700字左右。原文我能挤过去◎江苏省如东实验中学曹曙雨淅淅沥沥地下着,密密地打在我身上,凉飕飕的。雨丝漫无边际地向外延伸,把天地遮掩得严严实实。我挤【“挤”字扣题】在人群中,忐忑地向考场走去。【开篇宜简洁,以写景烘托心情的文字可压缩。】也许是因为这次模拟考是中考的风向标,我感到格外慌张。【慌张成什么样,缺少细节描写】逼着自己奋力挤了这么多天,却真的没有把握能顺利挤过这一关,各种复杂的情绪在此刻不自觉地集中到
Article title “” crowded “as a topic to write a narration of affection class. 700 words or so. The original text I can squeeze over ◎ Jiangsu Rudong Experimental Middle School Cao Shu rain lingering underground, close to hit me, cool. Rain silk endless extension to cover the world to be tidy. I squeezed [ ”squeeze " word deduction title] in the crowd, shyly walked to the examination room. [Opening should be concise, to set the mood of the scene set text can be compressed. Perhaps because of this simulation test is the benchmark vane, I feel particularly panic. What kind of panic into what, lack of detail description Forcing so many crowds squeeze so many days, but really not sure to squeeze through this smoothly, all kinds of complex emotions at this moment unconsciously concentrated