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辅导点拨:文章主题鲜明,重点突出,层层推进,语言精练,排比句的运用增强了文章的气势,联系实际也非常贴切。你屹立青山,青山峥嵘;你拥抱大地,大地恢宏;你横贯神州,神州平添无限风采;你饱经沧桑,沧桑造就历代精忠。这就是长城——中华的骄子,东方的巨龙。长城!你那雄伟的气势,至今使我心潮澎湃,让我魂牵梦绕!长城,你像是一条蜿蜒盘旋的巨龙,盘亘在世界东方的土地上。你验证了中华上千
Counseling Dialogue: The theme of the article is distinct and prominent, with layers of promotion, concise language, and the use of parallel clauses enhances the momentum of the article and is also very appropriate in connection with reality. You stand green hills, towering mountains and valleys; you embrace the earth, the earth magnificent; you transcontinental Divine, Divine peace and invincibility; you have experienced the vicissitudes of life vicissitudes created loyalty throughout the ages. This is the Great Wall - the pride of China, the Eastern dragon. Great Wall! Your majestic momentum, so far I have an upsurge of emotions, let me cherish the dream! The Great Wall, you like a winding dragon winding plate in the East of the earth in the world. You verified thousands of China