慕容无言出题人点评本文作者的优势在于扣住了“市井”的题,却没有把题做深、做圆。首先作者没有把角色逼入绝境,或绝境营造得不够真实。生活常理,不把猪赶进死胡同里,就见不到猪的骁勇与果决。再举例,一个壮汉把一个残疾孩童堵在墙 Murong speechless issuer comments The author of this article has the advantage of retaining the “market” problem, but did not do a deep, round. First, the author did not push the character into desperation, or the desperation was not created enough. Life is justified. If you don’t put the pig into a dead end, you will not see the pig’s courage and decisiveness. As another example, a strong man stuck a child with a disability to the wall