好文章不怕改,当然修改要得体、得法,这文章才会更显其精气神。因此,这个“修改”大有学问。本届上海市作文竞赛,不少写作好手脱颖而出,在规定时间内能写出一篇得奖作文实属不易,在可圈可点之余,细细读来,尚有不少可删、可改、可商榷之处,因此,就有了这个“竞赛作文”的新栏目——这也是应广大师生的要求,选出一些获二等、三等奖的作文,只对标点及错别字等作了修改,并请名家作中肯的点评,一并刊登。这对文章的作者及广大热爱写作的同学不无启发与裨益,由此或可悟得为文之道、修改之法。——编者 Good articles are not afraid to change. Of course, changes should be decent and successful, and this article will be even more astounding. Therefore, this “modification” is very learned. In this Shanghai essay contest, quite a few writers came to the fore and it was not easy to write an award-winning composition within a specified period of time. In addition, when you read more carefully, there are still many that can be deleted. As a result, there is a new column for this “competition composition” - it is also the selection of some second- and third-class essays that should be requested by teachers and students, only for punctuation and typos, etc. Made a change, and invited famous experts to make comments, published. This is not incomprehensible and beneficial to the author of the article and the students who love to write. This can be understood as the way of writing and modifying. --editor