编者推荐:①由点到面开拓。老板娘说『怎么会呢?如数交还客人在店内遗失的物品,这是职业要求』——展示商界普遍都有职业操守。但是,『为我服务的换成了她手下的小姑娘,她们省去了「米线吃法」的那段话』,应修改为『……由她们来对我说「米线吃法」的那段话』——对比,只能表现『一点亮』;拓展,彰显『亮一片』。尽管『职业操守』还有不尽如人意之处,但是,『做文章』要『正面出之』。②向纵深开掘。作者交代『老板娘不再当服务员了,驻进了办公室』『小店升格为饭店,门庭若市』——有职业操守者必然发达!此文可直接用于『以人为本』话题作文,标题可沿用。 Editor’s Recommendation: 1 Open up from point to point. The proprietress said “How could it be? The number of items that were lost to the guests in the store, which is a professional requirement” – shows that professional conduct is common in the business community. However, “The service for me has been replaced by the young girl under her. They have omitted the phrase of ”rice noodles to eat“. They should be changed to ”...they tell them to say “Noodle to eat” to me. Paragraphs - contrast, can only show “a light”; expand, highlight “bright one.” Although “professional conduct” still does not have satisfactory results, “find out” should be “front out.” 2 Dig deeper. The author confessed that “the proprietress was no longer a waitress, and she was stationed in the office” and “the store was upgraded to a restaurant, and the market was perfect.” There must be developed professional staff! This article can be directly used in the “people-oriented” topic essay, and the title can be used.