温州九中的卢心怡笔力活泛,兼备俊朗,排比段落不俗,是一奇。以第三人称来写,语带自嘲,也是看点。陈雅婷是唯一采用诗歌体的,写得略平些,还应该多向谷川俊太郎先生学习;佟二堡二中的两位姑娘都是走写“真”路线的,郝晓彤运用了东北方言,语言有点错乱的青春力;陈泉卉文虽短,却简练有神采,性情毕现。四位选手若选一位入选决赛,我比较倾向卢心怡。 Lu Xinyi in Wenzhou nine vividly pan, both handsome, than the good row, is an odd. To third person to write, self-deprecating language, but also Aspect. Chen Yating is the only use of poetry, written a little more flat, but also should be more to Mr. Gu Chuan Jun Tarot learning; Tong Er Fort two girls are to write the “true ” line, Hao Xiaotong use of the northeast dialect, Language is a bit confused youthful force; Chen Quan Hui Wen is short, but concise and elegant, the character is complete. If one of the four players selected for the final, I am more inclined to Lu Xinyi.