对原稿的意见: 《来吧!年轻的朋友》这支歌曲,从歌词来看,是鼓舞青年们为四化贡献才华的,在一定程度上表现了青年一代朝气蓬勃的乐观主义精神。虽然也有一些概念化的词句,但还是值得为它谱曲。旋律创作方面,有得有失,好的方面是: 1.曲式结构清楚、合理,根据原词,将曲式恰当地处理为三段体(三部曲式)。 On the original manuscript: “Come! Young friend” song, from the lyrics, is to encourage young people to contribute to the talent of the four modernizations, to a certain extent, demonstrated the vibrant youth optimism. Although there are some conceptual words, but it is worth composing music for it. Melody creation, there are gains and losses, good aspects are: 1. The music structure is clear and reasonable, according to the original, the proper handling of the song for the three body (trilogy).