教师简评:小作者引经据典,从阅读古书中寻找写作灵感,在生活中寻找写作素材,注重积累,善于观察。以螃蟹为线索,描写洗蟹时,小作者用词准确到位,把奶奶洗蟹时的动作、神态描写得真实具体;吃蟹时的描写更为精彩,从螃蟹的色、香、味、形等角度进行了细腻的描写,语言流畅,生动有趣,看着让人垂涎三尺! Teacher Comment: The author of the small quotation from the Code, from reading ancient books to find inspiration in writing, looking for writing material in life, focus on accumulation, good at observation. To crab as a clue, describing crab washing, the small author accurate place, the grandmother when washing crab movements, demeanor described in real detail; description of crab eating more exciting, from the crab’s color, smell, taste, shape Equal point of the delicate description of the language fluent, lively and interesting, looking at the coveted!