我们平时都说,写作文要具体。那么,怎样才算具体呢?一般来说,写人为主的习作,就是要围绕人物重点写具体,让读者看得见人物的行为举动。举个例子,有一篇题为《妈妈关心我》的作文,主要片断小作者是这样写的:我有一个关心我的妈妈,她在各方面都十分关心我。当我要去春、秋游的时候,她都要为我买好 We usually say that writing should be specific. So, what is concrete? In general, write-based exercises, is to focus on the characters focus on the specific, so that readers can see the behavior of people's behavior. For example, there is an essay entitled “Mom cares about me”. The main piece of the little writer writes: I have a mother who cares about me and she is very concerned about me in all aspects. When I want to go spring, autumn tour, she must buy for me