东风里,掠过我脸边,星呀星的细雨,是春天的绒毛呢。选自《踪迹》赏析:诗人先以“星”来形容雨之细小,然后准确地抓住了春雨的特征,用一个十分贴切的比喻———“绒毛”来形容春天的细雨,不仅把“星”具体化了,而且进一步把春雨暖和、纤细、飘忽等特点强化了。全诗以清新的语言, Dongfeng, passing my face, the star of the stars rain, it is the spring fluff. Appreciation from the “Trace” Appreciation: The poet first described “the star” as a tiny rain, and then accurately grasped the characteristics of the spring rain, with a very apt analogy --- “fluff” to describe the spring rain, not only The “stars” are embodied, and the spring rain is further strengthened, slender and erratic. The poem in fresh language,