短文改错专题练习

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  短文改錯(共10小题;每小题l分,满分10分)
  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
  增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
  删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
  修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
  注意:
  1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
  2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
  (一)
  One day, I went to the Botanical Garden. When I walked along the road admired the flowers, I caught sight of two girls which were picking the flowers. I thought it wrong for them to do that. Without hesitate, I immediately asked them to stop. I was told them that we should protect these flowers in the gardens. I also explained that there would be no flowers left if someone picked the flowers like them. Then, they agreed to me, and promised that they won’t do it again. Well, two girls were taking photos when I left here.
  (华南师范大学附属中学 吴玉婷)
  (二)
  Zhang Zheng is my male god, who is a outgoing boy. He had a good command of English. When I find that difficult to convey my feelings with English, I always turn to him. He is very helpful and rely. Yesterday he made a speech under the flag, which theme is “English can accomplish our future”. After school I had a bunch of flowers delivering to him for his wonderful performance. He was so much thankful that he treated me a big meal. We encouraged each other to work hard in preparations for going to a key university.
  (河南省渑池县第二高级中学 何冰清)
  (三)
  In the modern world, it is important to be well-informed. Success in many fields depend on getting the late information. At the same time, failure in policy-making often results from the lack of the necessary information. There are many ways of get information. First, we read newspaper and magazines. Second, we listen the news on the radio and watch them on television. Third, we surf the Internet for variously kinds of the information. As far as the role of information in the future is concerned, it is believed what information will play a more or more important part in the future.
  (广东省韶关市曲仁中学 黄国华)
  (四)
  Recently, Tai Chi has became more and more popularer around the country. It is not only a ancient martial art, but has also been wide acknowledged as an effective health exercise. Famous for their graceful and well-balanced movement, Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are essential in our modern stressful life. Besides, if you want to learn Tai Chi , you can contact with me. I’m convinced that I can recommend the best school and best trainer in our city for you, for my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited instruct others all over the country. Remember, my number is 010-123456789   (安徽省合肥润安公学 解光琼)
  (十四)
  Dear Sir,
  I’m writing to ask for a chance to be one of the host families for the British students.
  The following is my reasons. First, we own a big house and a private car, which makes it conveniently for the British students to go to school and back home. In addition, I am good at English and our parents are both English teachers. I believe that there will be no problems in our conversation. More importantly, my family had hosted two American students last year. However, we have experience in looking for the students. We are sure that we could offer a pretty good condition to them.
  I would appreciate if you could agree with my application.
  Yours sincerely,
  Li Hua
  (廣东省罗定中学 李再廷)
  (十五)
  Dear Sir or Madam,
  I’m Li Hua. Knowing that our school newspaper is advertising for an English editor, I show great interest in them. Thus, I am written to apply for the position.
  I have been learning English for over a decades, having good command of English. I once attended an English Writing Competition and win first place. What’s more, I have received some relevant professional training but I would like to put that I have learned into practice. If I win the position, I will spare no effort to serve for the students.
  I would appreciate it if my application could be serious considered. Looking forward for your reply.
  Yours,
  Li Hua
  (广东省汕头市下蓬中学 罗丽雯)
  (十六)
  I like watching movies very much and I think watching English movies is a effective method of learning English. Last year, I joined in the English Club in our school, which benefit me a lot. The club were made up of twenty students, most of which were interested in English. They watched ten original English movies, includes the classic Casablanca, Rebecca, A Tale of Two Cities and so on. We watched each of the film several times until we full understood them. By now, I find that I have nearly become fluent as a native English speaker.
  (广东省深圳市梅林中学 王小琴)
  (十七)
  Wednesday, June 12, Sunny
  Last Sunday afternoon, some of my best friend and I went to play football in the open ground inside our neighborhood. We really had a good time play football! Suddenly I kicked the ball so hard that it fly at a window. It was unfortunate that the window was broken!An angrily woman looked out of a window, shouting at us. We were all too frightening!She came to us and asked whom did that. I hurried to said sorry to her. The woman forgave him and told us not to play football around in next time. What bad day!   (广东省吴川市第三中学 李华军)
  (十八)
  Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safely at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get themselves injured while we are having sports. Second, there are too much students at school, and our hallways is too narrow. So don’t crowded with each other especially when we go to upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be a accident. Besides, we should friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least, we should be careful to eat health food and keep away from junk food, that is harmful to our health.
  (广东省吴川市第三中学 李华军)
  (十九)
  Reading is very important. We can get knowledges through reading. It can not only opens our minds, but also make us cleverer or happier. Our study can be improved if you read more good books. The more we read, the more we learn, and the bright our future will become.
  However, some students spend time watching the TV or going on line to play games. It takes many of their spare time. On my opinion, everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese tradition culture to the world.
  (廣东省吴川市第三中学 李华军)
  (二十)
  It is known that a outstanding student is popular with all people. However, how to be outstanding is still puzzled among some students. My viewpoints is as follows.
  First, we must learn to behave well, follow the school rules or obey the laws. Secondly, we should form the habit of be punctual. No matter what do, we should do it well and on time. Thirdly, studying hard to gain high marks is which we try to pursue to go on to university.
  From all the above, I believe that if we do well in these aspect, we are sure to become outstanding students!
  (广东省吴川市第三中学 李华军)
  (二十一)
  Of all the subject, I like Chinese best because I have/\ excellent Chinese teacher, Ms Sun. She has been taught us for only three months, but she is thinking highly of by all the students.
  Ms Sun is 36 years old and she is neither tall nor short. She is always the last to leaving her office. She always tries to make her classes interest and lively but we are getting on well with each other. On the other hand, she is very strict in us in our studies, which make our Chinese improved. We all think of that she is the best teacher we have met in the school.
  (湖南省衡南县第三中学 资 娟)
  (二十二)
  Dear David,
  Hearing that you lacked friends at the moment, I feel terrible sorry. I would like to give you some suggestions on how to make friend and get rid of loneliness.   Since you can perfectly give a speech in the public, why not joining the debate team in your school? Obviously, we will meet many schoolmates who have the same interests with you there. Besides, you can join the school drama club which you will encouraged to communicate with others .
  I hope you can get out from the trouble , and I am convinced that you will have some friends soon.
  (廣西南宁市第二中学 周黎红)
  (二十三)
  Dear Peter,
  Glad to accept your letter asking for details about my school library.
  The library, surrounded by green trees, is behind our classroom building, and in the front of it is a beautiful garden. Walk into it, you will find rows of bookshelf. All the books, newspapers and magazines are placing neatly. Besides, we students can find we are interested in easily. Everyone can borrow up to 5 books at a time and keep it for a month. The library is open from 8 a.m. to 7 p.m. on weekdays. It is real home to all book lovers. I like it very much.
  Yours,
  Li Hua
  (广西南宁市第二中学 赵代玲)
  (二十四)
  With the entrance exam comes near, how to release pressure is a big concern. My opinions are as follows.
  As we know, proper pressure can make difference to our studies, while feel much too stressed will lead to failure. Personal, when I’m faced with pressure, I am always turn to teachers for help. After all, it’s heart-to-heart talks which can relax us. Moreover, doing exercises is a good choice to rid ourselves of the heavy pressure. Not only can it help us keep fit, and also help us feel at ease.
  I firmly believe that only when we deal with our pressure well can we make progress on our studies.
  (广西南宁市第二中学 叶冬琳)
  (二十五)
  Dear Max,
  I am Li Hua. I’m writing to inviting you to this year’s Dragon Boat Race series. The race series takes place from the 25th to 30th May in Shenzhen.
  I know you have a great interest to Chinese culture. So your participation would be of great valuable to you. It will allow you to experience one of China’s most important traditional festival, commemorating(纪念) an important figure from your history. You’ll also enjoy the many colourfully activities and delicious foods that is part of the festival.
  If you can come, please reply before 15th April, we can prepare. I look forward to your response.
  Yours,
  Li Hua
  (广东省深圳科学高中 方 钊)
  (二十六)
  How’s anything with you? I have been thought of you since you returned home the last year. You know, my English used to be poor, which make me worried and helpless. Otherwise, things began to change when you came to teach us. It was with your encouragement or help that I improved my English little with little. Now I have caught up with other. That is why I’m so gratefully to you. I hope you can have a chance work in China in the future so that I can meet you again.   (廣东省中山市第二中学 刘海谊)
  (二十七)
  Some day I was shopping at a supermarket with my five-year-old son, Tony. We were about to leave while we found that an elderly lady had fell over at the entrance minutes earlier. Fortunately, many peoples stopped to help her.
  Saw a flower stall nearby, my son asked me whether he could sell the lady a flower to make her feel better. I was glad with Tony’s sweetly idea. To our delight, the flower seller offered us the flower for free after hearing we said.
  Tony gave the flower to the lady and was comforted her. The elderly lady looked at Tony with love in his eyes and gave him a grateful smile.
  (四川省会理第一中学 何 超)
  (二十八)
  It is often said that if you are in Beijing, there are two things we must do. One is to climb the Great Wall, but the other is eat Peking Duck. The origin of the Peking Duck dates back in the Ming Dynasty. Cookers from all over China travel to the capital to cook for the Emperor. However, many of the recipes for such“foods of the Emperor” were later spreaded out of the kitchen secret. With the fall of the Qing Dynasty in 1911, court chefs who left the Forbidden City set up restaurant around Beijing and brought Peking Duck and the other delicious dishes to the masses.
  (福建省漳州实验中学 张明辉)
  (二十九)
  I had great time throughout my May Day Holiday. On Monday, I went BBQ with my classmates whom threw a celebration party. Everybody was exciting about the holiday. I eat a lot of delicious food at that time.
  On Tuesday, I went to visit my uncle’s family with my parents. We went to celebrate our good time at a very much fancy restaurant in Shanghai. Late that day, we sang karaoke in my uncle house. From Wednesday on, I started to do our homework. Which was the end of it.
  All in all, I enjoyed my May Day Holiday at many ways.
  (广东省深圳市梅林中学 宋 越)
  (三十)
  Dear Prof. Green,
  I am Li Hua, high school student from China. I’m writing to know whether it is possibly for you to give me some advices on how to choose a major in your university.
  After graduation, I’d like to go to America for farther study. While I am surfing the Internet, I am totally interesting in your field or subject. Therefore, I decided to apply for your university and study in your field. Besides, I know little about the major. As you are experienced in this field, could you give in some suggestions to me?
  I am looking forward to you early reply.   (广东省深圳市光明新区高级中学 何美容)
  (三十一)
  From my point of view, nothing is much important than to receive education. The magic of education can make a person intelligence, smart, and reasonable. Physics and chemistry can be help you to understanding the world. Math can help you to be smart but train your brain. Art, IT, and painting can help you to learn some important skill in tomorrow’s world. Language can help you to communicate others. So the reason why we study at school for so a long time is because every subject is useful. You will understand no subject you are taking is a waste of our time.
  (河南省淮阳县淮阳一中 查晓娟)
  (三十二)
  I am quite disturbing these days as I have a disagreement with my parent over my career choice. I have always dreamed of being tourist guide, that will offer me great opportunities to broaden my horizons and enrich my experience. Therefore, my parents hope that I should go in for professions with a security income and stable life like teachers or doctors. Is it better to obey with my parents and take a career that 1 don’t enjoy but guarantee long-term stability? Or should I go against your parents’ will and pursuit a career that bring me happiness and satisfaction? What would you did if you were in my position?
  (广东省韶关市曲仁中学 黄晓华)
  (三十三)
  Dear Peter,
  I’d like to offer my congratulation to you on yours receiving the first prize of “Chinese Bridge”Chinese speech contest.
  I know you were not well at Chinese at the first. However, you practiced speak Chinese every day. As the saying goes,“Everything came to him who waits”. To my opinion, this match is too difficult for a foreigner, but I’m surprised that you became the champion. If you go on studying Chinese even hard, you will have the opportunity to study in China. At last, I hope to see you and communicate each other.
  Sincere congratulations to you again.
  Yours,
  Li Hua
  (湖北省十堰市鄖阳中学 汪艳兵)
  (三十四)
  I have learned that you eager to learn more about Chinese culture. Here are some learning resources to share with you.
  Newspapers are suitable for you to study the language. They contain correct words and grammar, that is of great benefit for your reading and writing. In an addition, reading magazines is also a greatly choice. Articles in magazines provides much information about Chinese culture, enabling you to understand this country farther. Besides, we can listen to Chinese songs as well as chat with native speakers.   I hope my advices can help. It is out of question that you’ll know Chinese culture better, for you are so smart or hardworking.
  (徐丽红)
  (三十五)
  I’m Li hua, one of your student in Oral English class. I was writing to seek help from you.
  I’m from the countryside that teachers don’t speak much English in class. That is because I am not good at listening or speaking. Now I find really hard to follow you in class. I hope you can recommend some listen materials to me such that I can improve my listening after class. Besides, could I practice speaking with you for half a hour at weekends at your convenience time? I think it can help improve my spoken English.
  I would be grateful if you could lend to me a helping hand.
  (廣东省中山市第二中学 温朝发)
  (三十六)
  I am writing to inform you of my plan on the next lesson. As usually, we will have our lesson in your dormitory in Sunday. I have to change time for the lesson from morning to afternoon for some personal affairs. Last lesson, when you learnt how to grasp a writing brush and how to control them freely, but the content of the next lesson is to know some basic strokes(笔画) of Chinese characters, that are the foundation of Calligraphy of China. Prepared for the lesson, you should have a Chinese writing brush and some rice papers.
  Contacted me if you have problems with my arrangement.
  (陕西师范大学附属中学 王宝花)
  (三十七)
  The Mid-autumn Festival, which is one of most important traditional festivals in China, fall on August 15th of the lunar calendar ever year. Not only is it popular in China, but it is also celebrating in many other Asian country. People believe that the moon is a symbol of family reunion, lucky and fortune. But it is a custom to express best wishes to the beloved ones in this particular time. On that day, people usually go back to home to have family reunion, enjoying a large meal with our family. They will also eat moon cakes, that are round cakes with meat, eggs, nuts and other things inside.
  (广西南宁市第二中学 金珊珊)
  (三十八)
  I am writing to tell you what I have learned about Chinese customs from my excited exchange to China. Well, the Chinese is extremely welcoming. One evening, I was invited with a Chinese family dinner. I had good appetite and the food was yummy. At dinner, my host kept on put more food in his rice bowl. He didn’t seem to hear me saying“No, thank you”in my poor speaking Chinese. This was a very specially experience I have had in China. In my culture, you don’t get more food if you don’t ask for much.   (河南省睢縣高级中学 李 明)
  (三十九)
  On the summer holiday, I went to visit my grandparents by bus. At a bus stop, a woman got on with baby in her arms. There was no seats left on the bus, so she had to stand. When I was hesitating about if to give my seat to her, a little boy stood up and made rooms for her. She thanked the little boy very much and all the passengers admire what the little boy had done. In shameful, I lowered my head. From it, I have learnt we should do our best to help people in their need. If everyone lends a help hand, the world will become very more beautiful!
  (广东省化州市实验中学 陈龙玉)
  (四十)
  I love my grandmother. It is very kind for her. She used live in the countryside but now she lives with our family. Tomorrow is her birthday but I want to give her something specially. I have made a photo album in that her photos are collected. There are 20 pages in it, included some photos going with the years. The front page has the word“A gift of love for my grandma 2017”. On the back of the album is one of hers large photos. I have been brought it to be decorated in a gift shop. I think she must loved the birthday gift.
  (广东省东莞市东华高级中学 梁冬萍)
  (四十一)
  Yesterday, we had great fun. We participated in a competition of Tang poems at hall of our school on March 28. The competition enjoyed greatly popularity among us students. It was hold in an attempt to not only enrich our campus(校园)life but greatly motivate in our passion for Tang poems. There were a great variety of interesting so well as exciting activity in the competition. We all fall in love with the competition. We true valued the chance to appreciate the beauty or essence(精华)of our culture from this competition. I all looked forward to the next competition of Tang poems.
  (四十二)
  Tony is a brave teenager and likes to help others. On Friday evening, Tony was on his way to home. Suddenly, he saw that a man pass him, running quickly with a bag. Then, a woman appeared. She was out of breath but she failed to move any more. Seeing this circumstance, Tony instantly realized which happened. He turned around and rapidly caught up with the man. He struck him violently. Then the man was knocked down. However, a crowd of people came around suddenly and tried to stop Tony. Some of us held camera. Gradual, Tony realized they were just shoot a film. Tony was very embarrassing at that moment.
  (四十三)
  Not all the people like to go to college. When I am a child, I always dreamt going to the college. I considered the college as a interesting place. So I thought they would bring a lot of funs to me. Now I become a student of Shenzhen University and I do enjoy studying there. In our school, there’re lots of clubs what can satisfy the needs of students. I join in the tennis club and manage to keep fit by play tennis every week. Because I have many available time in the college, so I can do some other exercise for one and a half hours every day.   (四十四)
  Yesterday was the Children’s Day. The Students’ Union of our school organize a visit to the orphanage(孤兒院). Before set off, we prepared some presents, including in toys, books and so on. On our arrive, we were divided into three groups. Some of us made cakes and breads with the children. Some put on interesting performances, that cheered the children up. Other did some cleaning in yard of the orphanage. In my view, the activity was really enjoyable and meaning. Admitted, it is significant for us to do a good deal and make contributions to the society.
  (四十五)
  Last week, we went to the Guangming Farm. Having reached at the farm, we began to prepare lunch. We had ever cooked before, so we were exciting to have a try. We collected wood, making a fire and cooked. Soon, our lunch was ready. Eating the dishes cooked by ourselves, we felt proud and happily. After lunch, we got involved in planting trees. Some dug holes while others planted trees and watered it. Seen the trees, we felt we had done something of great values for the environment. It was unforgettable experience, that gave us a good opportunity to be independent and raise our awareness of environmental protection.
  (四十六)
  Yesterday, I went to visit the museum downtown with my friends. We met at the school gate at 8 o’clock in the morning, but we went here by bus 301. In the museum, we saw many a gorgeous calligraphy works, that were created by masters in ancient China. Also, we appreciate fantastic Chinese paintings of natural beauty. We all had a good time there and gained some knowledges of our tradition culture. I think the visit on the museum had deepened my interest in Chinese culture. Thus, from then on, I read more and more related books to learning more about.
  (广东省深圳市新安中学高中部 雷康成 符曼静)
  (四十七)
  Dear Mary,
  I am sorry to hear that you are deeply depressed(沮丧) recently due to fail in the interview of the broadcast station in your school. I can understand that you are feeling now. It is rather disappointed to fail in an important interview, which you devoted a long time to it. But one failure doesn’t meant that you are not excellent. Actual, you are an intelligent girl.
  You are supposed to have a positive attitude at the failure, taking advantage of this chance to learn about some interview skill. Besides, you’d better reflect on your mistake after the interview so that you will be much experienced than before.
  I hope you will happy again.
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