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好的文章要有细节描写,要让人有如见其人、如闻其声、如临其境的感觉。可是有很多学生却不知道什么是细节描写,总是用一句话甚至一个词就把本该写的都概括了,写出来的习作平淡无味,没有打动人的地方。如何将一个词、一句话变成一段话呢?以下是我指导学生修改习作的一些具体做法。一、把一句话变成一段话例:今天春游,我很高兴。引导:这句话虽然有“高兴”一词,可是究竟怎么高兴,我们却不清楚。能不能不用“高兴”这个词,而是通过人物的动
Good articles should have details of the description, to make people feel like seeing others, such as the sound of his voice, immersive feeling. However, many students do not know what is the description of the details. They always summarize what they have written in one sentence or even one word. The written exercises are dull and tasteless and do not touch people’s places. How to turn a word into a passage? Here are some specific ways I guide students to modify their assignments. First, turn a word into a story: Today’s spring tour, I am very happy. Guide: Although the phrase “happy” word, but how happy, we are not clear. Can not do without “happy ” the word, but through the characters move