西安市王进忠先生创作的“高山流水”楷书中堂书法作品,章法严谨,用笔扎实,笔画舒展。墨色干湿。特别是落款的行书,结字的大小、笔画的变化都很好,而且有力度。整幅作品,稳重、浑厚、高雅、大气、宁静,含有书卷气,是一幅不错的作品。认真细读,严格严求,有如下个人之见与其商榷:1.楷书要求笔画布白均衡。“高”字的“(?)”内的两笔横划上疏下密,不舒服。2.“流”的“氵”最下一点笔,应顿笔后调整笔锋上挑,或侧锋笔压实 Xi’an City Mr. Wang Jinzhong created “mountains and rivers ” Kai-tung calligraphy works, strict rules, pen solid, strokes stretch. Ink wet and dry. In particular, the inscribed book, the size of the knot, the changes in strokes are good, but also strength. The entire work, steady, vigorous, elegant, atmospheric, quiet, with book gas, is a good work. Carefully read, strict strict requirements, the following personal opinions to discuss with them: 1. Regular script requires a balanced white strokes. “High ” words “(?) ” The two strokes on the Shu dense, uncomfortable. 2. “Flow ” “氵 ” The bottom of the pen, should be adjusted after pen stroke pen pick, or side front pen compaction