苏教版高中教材语文必修三中选录了美国著名诗人惠特曼的一首诗歌《啊,船长,我的船长哟!》。教材中诗歌第三节结尾一句被译为“只是我以悲痛的步履,漫步在甲板上,那里我的船长躺着,他已浑身冰凉,停止了呼吸。”对于其“漫步”一词我认为翻译不够妥帖。《现代汉语词典》:“漫步 The Jiangsu Education Press High School Textbook Chinese is a compulsory three-item selection of a poem by the famous American poet Whitman: “Oh, captain, my captain!”. The last sentence of the third section of the book was translated as “I was walking on the deck with sorrow and trembling. Where my captain was lying, he was already cold and stopped breathing.” I think about the word “walking”. Translation is not appropriate enough. Modern Chinese Dictionary: "Walking