两个病句的评改山东金乡县司马中学张圣环一、我单位职工凡病假、事假三天以上者，扣发当月奖金。此句出自九年义务教育三年制初中语文第五册４７页修改病句一题。（教师教学用书）６１页的答案是“省略不当，致使语意不准确、不完整。改为：‘我单位职工几请病假、事假超... Evaluation of Two Sentences: Zhang Shenghuan, Sima Middle School, Jinxiang County, Shandong Province 1. All employees of our unit who have sick or leave for more than three days shall be deducted for the current month’s bonus. This sentence comes from the nine-year compulsory education three-year system of junior high school fifth book 47 pages to modify the subject of a sentence. The answer to the 61-page (Teacher’s Guide Book) is "Improper omission, resulting in inaccurate and incomplete semantics. Change to: ’The employees of my unit have asked for sick leave, leave...